• Writing With a Three-Act Structure

    There are as many ways to plot your upcoming novel as there is writers. One of the most common plotting devices is the three-act structure! This post describes what the three-act structure is, breaks down each act and offers you guidance as to what you should be asking yourself each step of the way!

    What is a Three-Act Structure?

    A three-act structure is a popular plotting device for many genres of fiction and helps take your protagonist/hero from a normal day in Springfield to living happily ever after (or just happy for now!). The three-act plot structure breaks your story into – you guessed it- three-acts!

    Generally, your three act structure looks like this:

    What are the Components of Each Act?

    Now that you know, generally, what each act entails, let’s break it down even further!

    Act One

    – Background/Exposition: Introduce your protagonist (P), demonstrate what a normal day in P’s life looks like, and show readers what is important to P and the world P lives in.

    – The Catalyst: This is where you introduce the conflict/incident that sets P off on their journey! Without a catalyst, your story won’t exist.

    -Indecision/Denial: Your catalyst should push P our of their comfort zone. As a result, act one usually contains a scene where P tries to resist the call to action. However, this is not true for all stories. Perhaps, your protagonist is always willing to rise to the occasion and the resistance for P to embark on their journey is coming from some third-party (parent, sibling, partner, friend, etc.)

    – Counseling: If your protagonist is unsure whether they want to embark on their journey, act one will contain a scene where something happens or P talks to someone that changes their mind and P decides to answer the call to action after all.

    – Embarking on the Journey: Ultimately, P decides to embark on the journey and takes the first step on P’s new adventure! (This is usually where you will introduce your first main plot point, although sometimes this will happen at the same time as your catalyst).

    Act Two (the longest act):

    – Trials, Tribulations, and the People we Meet Along the Way: This is where your protagonist starts to encounter obstacles, meets new friends, and – maybe- even some enemies. This is where you will introduce readers to the “cast” and introduce the antagonist. P will change along the way as they overcome road-blocks and become shaped by events and people that occur/they meet.

    – The Edge of a Cliff/Taking the Leap (AKA the “midpoint”): Your protagonist is making good progress and decides to undertake a big step (a second major conflict). This is where P is tried the most and is forced to reflect on all that has occurred thus far and what lies ahead. In this bit, P grows into a force-to-be-reckoned with. In other words, this is where P gets the confidence to carry on and does so.

    Act Three:

    – Getting to the Climax: P is on the cusp of confronting the antagonist/engaging in the “boss battle,” and the antagonist is really showing off here what they are truly capable of. You spent act two building up the reader’s desire to root for P. This is where you raise the stakes and make your reader’s question whether P will really come out on top.

    – Climax: This is perhaps the most important moment in your story! The antagonist seems to have the upper-hand going into the climax. This is where P rises above and wins the battle! This will typically be a single scene.

    – Settling the Dust & a Return to a New Normal: This is where your protagonist will find themselves on the other end of their battle – life after the climax. This is where you tie up loose ends, show P returning to a new normal and wrap up everything that needs resolving.

    What to Ask Yourself While Plotting Your Own Story:

    Questions to Ask Yourself in Act One: What is status quo in P’s world? What is P’s biggest fear? What are P’s strengths and flaws? What is important to P?

    Questions to Ask Yourself in Act Two: Who does P like to surround themselves with? What would push P out of their comfort zone? What motivates P?

    Questions to Ask Yourself in Act Three: What are your antagonist’s strengths and weaknesses? What/who does P turn to when all hope is lost? How has P changed?

    Concluding Thoughts & Further Help:

    I hope this little crash course on the three-act plot structure has helped!

    If you would like further guidance, I am happy to announce we offer a Three-Act Plot Structure Guide/Workbook in our shop (downloadable as a PDF)!

  • Developmental Editing

    Developmental editing is a great way to help determine what works and what doesn’t with your manuscript.

    What is a Manuscript Evaluation?

    Developmental editing will look at the content, structure, style, pacing, cohesiveness, format, plot and characters from the very first to very last page of your manuscript.

    Developmental editing reviews and offers feedback content, structure, style, pacing, cohesiveness, format, plot and characters in your work, requires a SWOT analysis (identifies your work’s strengths, weaknesses, opportunities for growth and threats to success), and requires a certain degree of author-editor collaboration. They both want to answer how readable is manuscript and how successful is your story at portraying what you want to portray.

    Developmental editing comes after you have made substantial edits to your work/ after a manuscript evaluation (should you elect to have one) and is a great option for all authors, to see what works in their story, what gaps exist, which characters, scenes or chapters are superfluous, where pacing is a bit off and to help get your manuscript ready to send off to a publisher!

    What do you Offer?

    When you are happy with your manuscript and ready to get developmental editing, Cats, Coffee, Con Law is here to help!

    What you will get:

    • An analysis of your overall work
    • An analysis of how well your work fits its genre
    • Character, plot, and subplot analysis
    • Dialogue & action feedback
    • Pacing and readability feedback
    • Content ordering feedback
    • Multi-page editorial letter
    • Formatting help
    • Feedback on how well your book fits within its genre
    • Tips to help you overcome manuscript issues (e.g., pacing, setting/character development, etc.)
    • One-hour video chat with editor to discuss your feedback

    How Much Does it Cost?

    Cats Coffee Con Law believes in transparency!

    Developmental editing costs $0.032 per word.

    If you choose, you can send a 1,000 word sample to see how well you like my service that I will evaluate for you for free and to get a free-quote on what your manuscript would cost to get developmental editing!

  • First Chapter Critique

    What is the first step to a successful novel? It’s opening sentence and chapter! Your first chapter draws your readers in. The difference between your work being carried out from the bookstore or left on the shelf. Between an agent or publisher taking you on or sending a rejection letter.

    Whether or not you are publishing online, self-publishing, or sending off your your manuscript for agent querying, a first chapter critique is a beneficial tool to determine how strong your first chapter is.

    How Much Does a First Chapter Critique Cost & What is Included?

    Cats Coffee Con Law offers first chapter critiques at a flat-cost of $35.

    This includes developmental editing (see developmental editing tab to get a better understanding of what developmental editing is) and line editing (line-by-line editing that examines sentence structure, word choice, flow, readability, etc.)

  • Manuscript Evaluation

    A manuscript evaluation is a great way to help determine what works and what doesn’t with your manuscript, while putting the major decisions in your hand.

    What is a Manuscript Evaluation?

    A manuscript evaluation will look at the content, structure, style, pacing, cohesiveness, format, plot and characters from the very first to very last page of your manuscript. A manuscript evaluation is a great option for all authors, especially self-publishing ones who want to see what works in their story, what gaps exist, which characters, scenes or chapters are superfluous, and/or where pacing is a bit off.

    How is a Manuscript Evaluation & Developmental Editing Similar?

    Both review the content, structure, style, pacing, cohesiveness, format, plot and characters in your work, requires a SWOT analysis (identifies your work’s strengths, weaknesses, opportunities for growth and threats to success), and requires a certain degree of author-editor collaboration. They both want to answer how readable is manuscript and how successful is your story at portraying what you want to portray.

    What is the Difference Between a Manuscript Evaluation & Developmental Editing?

    Manuscript EvaluationDevelopmental Editing
    Type of FeedbackFeedback is more general with illustrative examplesIn-depth feedback with in-text comments
    Recommendations Provides recommendations that you may decide how & what to act upon Transforms/shapes your manuscript and requires editor-author collaboration to decide how and what should be acted upon
    Finance & Time Cheaper & ShorterMore Costly & Longer

    Manuscript evaluation better serves earlier iterations of your work where you are not quite sure what needs to be changed, if your plot, characters, writing style, etc. work. Developmental editing comes after you have made substantial edits to your work/ after a manuscript evaluation (should you elect to have one).

    What do you offer?

    Whether you just finished your manuscript, finished your first round of self-edits, or wherever you are in your editing process, Cats, Coffee, Con Law is here to help!

    What you will get:

    • An analysis of your overall work
    • An analysis of how well your work fits its genre
    • Character, plot, and subplot analysis
    • Dialogue & action feedback
    • Pacing and readability feedback
    • Content ordering feedback
    • Multi-page editorial letter
    • One-hour video chat with editor to discuss your feedback

    How Much Does it Cost?

    Cats Coffee Con Law believes in transparency!

    Manuscript evaluation costs $0.020 per word.

    If you choose, you can send a 1,000 word sample to see how well you like my service that I will evaluate for you for free and to get a free-quote on what a half or full manuscript evaluation.

  • Scrivener

    If you are like me, you probably started your writing career with your book scattered across countless Word documents, google docs, notebooks, and perhaps even sticky notes littered across your walls. There’s nothing wrong with that! (Remember: the best method to write your novel, academic works, etc. is whatever platform works best for you!)

    But, if you are new to writing or simply are looking to perhaps elevate your platform or find a platform that grants you a plethora of capabilities all in one spot, allow me to turn you onto Scrivener.

    Scrivener is the writing software I presently use and have for over five years now – I will never go back to anything else!

    What is Scrivener?

    Scrivener is a writing software tailored for authors. You can create outlines, write novels, non-fiction books, screenplays, academic papers, research, edit, and format them all in one place!

    Similar programs include LibreOffice, FocusWriter, and yWriter. I have experimented with all of these, but Scrivener remains my go-to.

    What I Like About Scrivener:

    Scrivener has some pretty cool features built in.

    It also allows you set project goals, see project statistics, including how long it would take the average reader to read your project, and view your writing history.

    One of my favorite features is the ability to conduct research and creates notes on it within the software. Highlight a term in your writing and click on “writing tools.” Scrivener will allow you to research the Google definition of that term or do further research on the term on Wikipedia and Google. Have part of a quote you want to integrate into your writing? Highlight it in your project, use the “writing tools” again and you can look it up on BrainyQuotes to help look for the full quote!

    Along this line, I adore that there are built in templates for character and setting development and built in places in the app for notecards and inspiration. You can even bring in outside images, PDF’s, etc. to split-screen use as reference as you write! This is especially helpful if you are getting old like me (is your late 20s the new over the hill?) and can’t always remember your plans and outlines off the top of your head as easily as you used to.

    Above: Sample built in templates

    What I like best about scrivener is the ability to write, edit, and format my novel in one central location. It is completely customizable so that I can divide my novel to fit my vision for it. The revision formatting allows me to color code my revision process while maintaining the ability to consult my in-app notes, research, inspiration, and outlines. When I am satisfied with the finish product (unless you are an anxious perfectionist with me and rarely satisfied with your own work) you can format it to fit your needs, whether that is a manuscript, proof copy, print book, ebook, script or screen-write.

    Finally, Scrivener allows you to upload your work to cloud services so you can easily sync between devices.

    The Downsides:

    Like anything in this world, Scrivener isn’t without its flaws. The apps dictionary is at times limited and I find is more in-line with British English (though perhaps I am wrong with this). However, you can build your own dictionary like any other writing program.

    There is also a bit of a learning curve with learning how to set up your projects so that when it comes time to compile it, the format comes out correctly. There are plenty of Youtube videos, reddit threads, and information from Scrivener’s website to walk you through this though!

    I find the most frustrating aspect to be the difficulty in copying from other documents into Scrivener. For example, sometimes when I am on the go, I will fire up my phone’s Googledocs and jot down a few lines of dialogue, ideas, whatever it may be. To get it into Scrivener, I need to copy it from Googledocs into Word and then into Scrivener and even then I have to tweak the formatting a bit.

    Finally, while, helpfully, you can have Scrivener on multiple devices and sync work between these devices (for example, I have it on both my laptop and tablet) you do need to pay for the software per device.

    Where to Get it:

    Want to start using Scrivener? Use this link to get a free trial or to download the software: https://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener-affiliate.html?fpr=catscoffeeconlaw_scrivener

    The nice thing about Scrivener, is you only pay once! Unless there is some huge update to it that necessitates a fundamentally altered software (I have never had this happen to date) you can use it on your device for as long as you want with no additionally payment.

    The price of the software is presently $59.99 and there is a 30-day free trial so that you can try it out before committing!

    If you think there are other writing software/apps you like that you think I should try, drop a comment!

    As always, happy writing!

    Scrivener: By writers, for writers.

  • Pansies – Alexis Hall

    Sometimes I think that’s all love is. Understanding, smoothing away your strangeness. Making you part of the world, not separate from it.

    Alexis Hall, Pansies

    Over the summer, I was incredibly fortunate to receive an Advance Reader Copy (ARC) of the incredibly talented Alexis Hall’s newest release: Pansies.

    Pansies joins Hall’s other titles as part of the widely popular Spires Series, including:

    • Glitterland
    • Waiting for the Flood/Chasing the Light
    • For Real

    Hall’s Spires Series are linked by sometimes-subtle-sometimes-not-so-subtle nods to characters and overarching themes like what it means to love, mental health, identity, and loss. If you want to feel, pick up a Spires novel. Not a single one is a miss.

    PANSIES SYNOPSIS:

    Alfie Bell is, in his heart, a Northern lad. After returning to his hometown of South Shields for the wedding of his childhood best friend, Alfie finds himself involved with an old school-”mate,” Fenimore O’Donaghue, the receiver of a younger-Alfie’s relentless bullying. Pansies follows Alfie and Fen as they, individually and collectively, navigate identity, grief, the past, and the ever-shifting dynamics of family, friendship, and relationships in adulthood.

    PANSIES REVIEW:

    Pansies by Alexis Hall

    My rating: 4 of 5 stars

    As a preliminary matter, this book hit three of my least favorite technical writing choices: 3rd person limited POV , written dialect (though Hall – as per usual- nails authenticity), and POVs via written letters. None of these choices factor into the review, but are included here only to make the point that if you are like me and finds these things slightly irksome, please endure. It will be worth it.

    There is plenty in Pansies that is so well-done and effortlessly makes you laugh, and hurt, and cry with Alfie Bell & Fen (shout out to Greg for also being fantastic). The Do-not-do-it-yourself, Lasagna cooking, Go-Kart scenes and basically the entirety of chapter 23 are among the moments in Pansies that had me smiling irrationally (and in the case of ch. 23 – both smiling and wanting to punch Alfie Bell (though I hasten to add I do not condone violence, even if it is towards fictional men)). As usual, Hall excels in painting gorgeous imagery, detailed world building, and granting a platform for queer struggle. Indeed, where I think Pansies excels the most is in painting the many difficulties one faces post-coming-out, whether that be from the never ending coming-out to others (including friends and family), the reality of the “after,” and wrestling with one’s identity in relationship to society and self-identity. All this framed in gold (a side note – this word is severely overused in this story – “gold” or “golden” is mentioned 45 times (I am not usually this persnickety but it was glaring at me this time)), with lines such as:

    “She wouldn’t understand, and he couldn’t explain. How bad it felt to be a shock. To be an idea people had to get used to. To be a moment of hesitation. A flinch when someone touched you. A wariness in their eyes. How much it fucking hurt.”

    Hall’s ability to make readers feel remains unparalleled. I have yet to walk away from any read written by Hall and not feel dazzled and transported, wistful and enlightened. In a way that is all Hall’s own, Hall makes one be human. I am always left with this twisted thing of wistfulness and nostalgia that is unique to Hall’s writing in a way that is truly indescribable. The closest I can come, is this bit of a letter written by Frederic Chopin:

    ““I keep your letters, as if they were ribbons from a beloved one. I have the ribbon; write to me, and in a week I will enjoy myself chattering to you again.”

    This slight tangent is all to say: these characters and stories Hall produces are invaluable, cherished by many, and equally as invoking of emotion with each re-read.

    All this aside, Pansies took me a bit longer to get into and left me a little less wonder-lusted. I suspect, unfortunately this has to do with how Alfie Bell was written, especially in the beginning – a bit bumbling or perhaps in a way that suggests he is more brute and less brain when we know he has a brain. To give Hall credit where credit is due, his technical choices with Alfie Bell do portray what he is trying to very well: Aflie is a bit repressed, confused with his identity and place, and northern-boy at heart and as the story progresses you feel his progress. His narration shifts from a bit short and short-sighted to a little more run-on, flowery, and emotional. This is brilliantly done.

    Pansies is sweet and honest, somewhat clunky, a bit a mess, but hey – so is life and relationships, right? I think actually Fen and Nora summarize Pansies best:

    “Um, what are weeds, then?”
    “Flowers where you don’t expect them.”

    All in all, Pansies is worth the spot on your bookshelf and/or e-reader. If you have read Glitterland, For Real, and Chasing the Light, you will appreciate the subtle and not-so-subtle nods. The author annotations add, as always, an added level of depth and platonic parasocial-ity. It is always wonderful to see the delightfully obscure factoids, well-thought out lines and events, and personality that goes into a work.

    Pansies was a victory, even if (personally) it was a harder fought one than I normally experience with Hall. This should not disway others from falling in love effortlessly with Alfie and Fen, as I am sure many have and many more will.

    Import Information You Don’t Want to Miss (or go Ahead – Miss it, See How Much I Care):

    Pansies will be released in the U.S., UK & Canada on November 5, 2024. You can purchase it at your local bookstore, the local and ethically sources curated book buying sources provided by Alexis Hall on his website (below) or through use of my affiliate link (https://amzn.to/4f2Vb3g).

    Make sure you check out the endlessly talented (and humorous) Alexis Hall on his socials (@quicunquevult) and check out some of Hall’s other fantastic titles including:

    • Boyfriend Material
    • Husband Material
    • 10 Things that Never Happened
    • Rosaline Palmer Takes the Cake
    • Paris Dallencourt is About to Crumble
    • Mortal Follies
    • Confounding Oaths

    And countless others! You can find a full list of Hall’s published worked at: www.quicunquevult.com

    As always, thank you SourceBook Casa Blanca for the ARC via NetGalley!

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  • Washington D.C. – A Weekend Glance

    Washington is a city of spectacles.

    ~ Martin Luther King Jr.

    Hello, lovelies from one of my favorite cities: Washington D.C. (Fun fact, I am a licensed attorney in D.C.!)

    I have spent now two weekends in D.C. and yet so much of this gorgeous and lively city remains unexplored! But if you are like me and often only have 36 hours to spend in D.C., here is a short overview of my most recent trip and my recommendations:

    Where to Stay:

    The Intercontinental: The Willard

    Now, let me preface this: the Willard is not for those faint of price tag. This five-star hotel will set you back about $300-$500 a night. However, I cannot recommend enough joining the IHC Ambassador Program. For $200, it gives you two years of membership, a free weekend night stay, free upgrades and a whole bunch of other perks! Stay one night and it literally pays for itself. This Ambassador Program was a blessing my most recent stay! I got upgraded ~1,100sqrft to a city-facing one bedroom suite for a minimal upcharge, received complimentary sparkling water, macaroons and card waiting for me. This room was massive with one-and-a-half baths, spacious living and dining quarters, two queen beds, a pull-out sofa and dual thermostat, my family and I still talk about our stay over a month later!

    Centrally located to the White House, the Washington Monument, and the Metro Center line, you absolutely cannot beat its location! If you take the double-decker tour buses, the Willard is one of the stops which make it even more accessible!

    How to Get Around:

    I cannot recommend enough the Metro! While you do have to purchase a card for each rider (cannot double swipe these cards), it is the easiest and most cost effective way to get around the city! You can get to most major landmarks via the Metro and its color-coded system makes it easily navigable. Take-it from a born-and-raised New Yorker who has taken the NYC subway system many-a-times: this is the easiest subway system to navigate (even for people like me who lack a general sense of direction geographically (and in life)).

    I have taken the tour buses before, however, these tours come with hefty price tags ($50-$95 a person generally) and I often find the audio does not work on them. Compared to tour buses I have taken in the past (Belfast, Dublin, Glasgow) the D.C. tours are the least bang for your buck.

    My advice: go get yourself a metro card and take a leisurely stroll around this beautiful city! Your wallet and figure will thank you!

    Places to Eat:

    D.C. is in no shortage of amazing eats! There is something for everyone. These are my go-to favs:

    • Old Ebbits Grill
    • Proper 21
    • The Hamilton
    • Astro-Donuts

    What to do:

    From historical landmarks, countless museums, parks, and the Arlington cemetery, there is no shortage of things to do and see.

    Here are some of my must-dos:

    (1) Capitol- Hill & Tour

    How to get to: Metro- Capitol South Station – Accessible via blue, silver and orange lines

    Hands down one of my favorite spots in D.C. As a young-lawyer with a strong interest in politics and national security, nothing beats the thrill of standing being in the “room where it happens.” (Hamilton fans?) You will want to be sure to reserve your tour time in advance as they fill up quickly! Remember, most tours in D.C. require you to go through TSA level security – pack lightly and accordingly.

    Especially if you go in the summer like I often do (P.S. D.C. in the summer months is hot), the Capitol Hill tour provides a much needed break from the unrelenting heat. The tour-guides are treasure troves of information and you will be blown away by the stunning architecture and history.

    If you wish to meet your representative and Congress is in session, you must coordinate this through your local Senator or Representative’s office.

    After completing the tour, you can grab a bite to eat at the Capitol Cafe, tour the gift shop, or the museum area. There is a cute debate area where you can make your own campaign button, make your own speech in front of your constituents, or vote in a pressing matter.

    The Capitol Building, additionally, has an underground tunnel to the Jefferson Library, which is next up on our list.

    (2) Library of Congress/Thomas Jefferson Building

    Have you ever been in love before? If not, and if you are a book-lover, you are about to.

    The Jefferson Library is the keeper of – you guessed- Thomas Jefferson’s private collection and countless other texts.

    And the sights are stunning. Head to its front side to see breathtaking views of the Capitol Building and Washington Monument. Approach the split stairs to see the Neptune Fountain and take in all the gorgeous Corinthian Columns and Beaux architecture. With quotes engraved into gold leaf all around, there is no shortage of sights to take in.

    Grab a library card and you can enter places tourists can’t.

    (3) The White House & Eisenhower Building

    It is not a trip to D.C. without a stroll down Pennsylvania Avenue to see the White House and Eisenhower Building.

    There is a heavy Secret Service presence around this area, so be on your best behavior! Many time throughout the year, there are many protests, movements, and similar demonstrations along this strip, so you may want to do a quick google search before heading down (but it is a great way to see democracy in action!).

    The Eisenhower Building, originally constructed in 1888 and once serving as the State, War, and Navy Building, now houses a multitude of executive offices including the Office of the Vice President, the OMB, and the National Security Council. Part of the White House compound, you can certainly see why news travels quickly to the POTUS.

    (4) International Spy Museum

    If you are an intelligence nerd, like me, a history lover or simply wanting to get in touch with your inner 007, the International Spy Museum is a must. Conveniently accessible from the L’Enfant Plaza station, bring your student ID to enjoy a student discount.

    Climb through air vents, hold onto a helicopter rail for dear life, complete mission’s on behalf of your agency and learn about real-life espionage.

    I spent about 2.5 hours here and it was a blast.

    (5) The Lincoln Memorial & Reflecting Pool

    The Lincoln Memorial is another iconic D.C. landmark. From Obama’s 2009 inauguration, countless concerts, movements and memorials to making an appearance in films, books, and video games, the Memorial and Reflecting Pool is not to be missed!

    Taking the metro? It’s closest station is Foggy Bottom. From this station it is about a mile walk to the monument.

    The Lincoln Memorial is also accessible from the Washington Monument (though you are probably walking a mile either way).

    Fun Fact: While you are at the Lincoln Memorial make sure you take a careful glance at the right-hand north-interior wall. You might just see a cleverly concealed spelling mistake in the Gettysburg address. When initially engraved “Future” was mis-engraved as “Euture.” If you know where to look, you can still see the remnants of an “E.”

    (6) Jefferson Memorial

    This is one I only got to see at a distance (twice) but this is another memorial I would not miss (do as I say, not as I do!). It offers a great view of the reflecting pool and Washington Monument and both times I have been in DC for a weekend trip there have been wedding ceremonies hosted within it!

    (7) The Washington Monument

    Did you know the Washington Monument is 555 feet tall? Now you do and you can go up in it to it’s look out! Tickets sell out quickly so I recommend you purchase at least a month before your trip.

    Within walking distance to the White House and Lincoln Memorial, the Washington Monument gives you the perfect vantage point for not only the aforementioned, but also the Capitol Building and the Jefferson Memorial.

    I have yet to see a lot of the war memorials, Arlington Cemetery and the tomb of the fallen soldier, the national archives, the Supreme Court (gasp) and countless other museums. These should all be added to an itinerary if room allows. I guess I will just have to go back (and I cannot wait!)

    Have you been to D.C.? What are your favorite places to visit and eat? What are your tips? Leave a comment!